All Comments on 'Game Day'

Loved this, would also like to read a sequel.

On page 4 Sue suddenly appears then disappears. Maybe the girls know a 4th or 5th to make it more even in the next chapter

Dat's da way to "enjoy" a game!

Humorous and hot, just the way I like stories. The narration is funny.

I enjoyed this but feel it's better as a stand alone. Any further chapters are going to lead to escalations.

Swapping and full on orgies. While that worked in the D+D series there was always a pretense of larping. Even in your improbable world a 5-3 split of orgies and swapping will leave people feeling hurt and left out.

Same old , same old. Wonder why these characters would be married since they act like single people with no self control. No embarrassment, no worries and no actual love, just lust

I know you said you tried and it made it boring, but I wish there would've been some kind of backstory to why Jess so easily got naked in front of everyone and Dale being fine with it. Being a bit wild in college didn't really do much for reasoning. Still a hot story, but too bad the wives didn't take turns bouncing on all the different dicks in the room. Thanks for the story, and I'll be checking out more of your offerings!

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

Always glad to read what you write, P.

I want this "team" to go all the way to the Super Bowl!

Who is Sue?

Confused at one point as the person sat on Dale lap changed

Nice idea thou - part 2 could be interesting

Dude! You are insane, as was this! So hot. Seriously loved it. As with all of your stories, I laughed my ass off. Also enjoyed (being the pervert I am) when Jenn tackled Dale and gave him a big old sloppy kiss that tasted of something he'd never had before. You did throw me for a minute there when you called one of the ladies Sue. Wondered if you'd added one to the mix here, like maybe the neighbors bored of football wife who'd come over to see what all the ruckus was about. That could have been fun.😊. Enjoyed Dale offering Jenn a bit of the creamy white goodness he'd whipped up for her at the beginning. This great story had me whipping up my own batch of creamy white goodness too.

Always enjoyable. Thanks for the laughs. Love to see it carried on.

This was great fun and very well written. I would love to hear about the next game. Five well earned stars and thank you.

Wow. Lust and humor. Great combo.

Even good grammar, a rarity.

I mean if it worked you have to go again?

Sequel for sure!

Superb! What a cum fest at the end.

Well told...

Great story!