All Comments on 'Games of Dominance Ch. 01'

Amazing story, just the usual complaint... far too short!!! :) Please write more xxx

Interesting premise.

But the gay future is a turn off.

And sex happens much too fast.

Needed to slow down. Needed lots of teasing. Of his cock. Of his balls. With her tits.

Needed to have had her make him what he'd imagined/visualized when he jerked off to thinking about fucking her.

Three stars.

I agree with some of the other comments. Great start. Lots of promise but slow down the story a bit and make them longer. All that being said watching for the next one!