All Comments on 'Gangbang Party Ch. 05'

First, "it's clear you and I can no longer live together." But then - "What I am looking for is a house bitch. A sub, willing to live in my apartment and serve me." So I don't get it, it sounds like Rio is what Jermaine wants, but it isn't? Makes no sense to me.

Agree with the anonymous comment,i dnt think it makes sense with the ending.. jermirne should be happy he get one which he wants ,if he really wants a sub then ,there is no other sub than he discovered in his roommate..

Non sense story.......

The ending didnt make sense. Rio was just what Jermaine wanted so why put him out?.

Why do so many of your stories, clearly written by a non-American probably non-Black person, have to feature such strange and forced used of racialized vernacular?

Black Americans don't speak the way you do in your stories and they read exactly like a white person's idea of how black people talk.

Some Black Americans do use the term "nigga', but not along with otherwise perfect English. The otherwise good or ok stories are ruined by disrespectful and lazy writing with use of unnecessary racialized language to fulfill the fantasies of white audiences.

The ending sucks i almost cried

The ending makes this story not so good

Where do I join this party.

Good story through all five chapters, but sad ending. Wasn't Rio already becoming Jermaine's house bitch. MLF

Bad story bad ending

Fuck. Was so hot then in the last para you crushed me. Sounds like jermaine was the kind of house bitch Rio wanted. Personal preference here but some of my dom best top fucks IRL are friends too. Hate themes where the dom ends up rejecting this friend/bf/cumdump after using the sub gives him exactly what the dom wanted