All Comments on 'Gangy's Gap Ch. 06'

Dry as a bone.

You are Obviously well educated as evident by your writing, but it had little emotional resonance aside froom the Claudia death spiral.

Awful, just awful

A very good story. Traumas affect people everyday and we never can predict how a person would respond to them. Kudos to the mc for hanging out there as much as he did. Keep on with your stories.

Are we finally finished with this?

Garbage, written for the sewer rats who roam this category. Gave it a one star rating.

A very well written, but rather dry story. Full credit to the author for his time and patience in telling this tale. Not withstanding the above though, I did find it somewhat emotionally barren. The characters did not exude any excitement or charisma, nothing to really grip the reader with anticipation. Too matter of fact as though it was a text book as opposed to a novel/cum love story.

The “Gap” between this story and erotica is insurmountable.

Story was well written, but I didn't much care for it as it was a very slow-moving dry story. 5 for the writing and 3 for the story.

Listen to the Neyman piece. Was new to me…I liked it

I found the story dry, not much passion Surprised at the few comments perhaps the wrong audience

Well...I guess they do everything human differently in New Zealand. I found every person in this, and their behaviors, baffling. What I could understand I didn't believe, and most of it I didn't understand.