All Comments on 'Garden Club'

by Joeehartley

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1thaiguy1thaiguyover 1 year ago

This wta good starter but needs follow up

AileyInnAileyInnover 1 year ago

A hint of what could manifest… Good read. Very stimulating…

redpoppiesredpoppiesover 1 year ago

Nice fantasy for an older person like me. It could be expanded on with additional chapters.

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Zieglerover 1 year ago

Would love more description of the women’s appearances and the man’s. Loved the scenario.

DarjohnDarjohnover 1 year ago

Fun reading-live in a similar neighborhood

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

hope there is more with the garden club

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****That was hot my, but my allergies will not let me work in a garden. Thanks for sharing. This great idea🤔

cousin_chuckcousin_chuckover 1 year ago

One minor criticism: you kept changing character's point of view. If the story is from the man's POV, stick with him, not to what the woman is thinking. A very small and niggling detail. I think that Literotica should have an additional category of stories: sex between oldsters. Not young/old but old/old. Gray couples. My whole life I've had an older woman fetish. Now that's I'm old it is a difficult fetish to indulge but I manage sometimes. More gray stories, please. Preferably non-fiction.

Ed19611961Ed19611961over 1 year ago

Nice intro to the garden club. You captured the excitement of exhibition, especially with an erection.

jay1459jay1459over 1 year ago

Great story (again)!!! Really enjoy your work. Wish I could find a neighborhood like this. Thanks again, Jay

maddictmaddictover 1 year ago

Jackie, Jackie, how does your(secret) garden grow. With cockel shells and three old maids in a row (!)

maddictmaddictover 1 year ago

Joe.

I like the story, I was trying to be clever ryming with Mary Mary how does your garden grow. I guess I failed.

To the ladies I've got a garden

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not only is it good but also it is very sweet.

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyover 1 year agoAuthor

To the anonymous commenter who thought this is both good and sweet. Thank you.

thorbetthorbetabout 1 year ago

Great 5* story about older people who still want sex and excitement in their lives. Too often it is missing in their lives and solo pleasuring doesn't always satisfy their needs, but 'mature' stories like yours always lead to full arousal. Thank you.

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