All Comments on 'Gardening: Clearing Ground'

by JaielleBlack

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visioneervisioneerover 2 years ago

Your have a wonderfully naughty and dirty imagination. I look forward to reading part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story for the most part. The name calling is fine as part of foreplay/ sex it can be overwhelmingly erotic. In this case it looks like he’s treating her like a whore as well, is that a latent fantasy coming to fruition? It could be a one off scene? Or it could be something he’s arranged for his enjoyment but there’s no way for the reader to know which applies. Looking forward to reading more to see where this leads. Old faithful dominant mind fuck.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

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