All Comments on 'Gardening Delights Ch. 01'

by Lion24655

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DonricoDonricoalmost 13 years ago
MMM Yummy

I'll be back to read about the daughters? I hope.

Aussie_TonAussie_Tonalmost 13 years ago
nice story.

A great story. Looking forward to reading about the daughters. The anal with the husband was a little unrealistic but nice work regardless.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Liked it overall but....

you had had the wrong name Tom instead of Tony way to many times which threw off the enjoyment of reading it every time it happened. Hopefully chapter 2 has been proof read a few times before it was published, otherwise I won't even bother reading it through the end.

Bi47Bi47over 6 years ago
Very very good

You are fantastic writer!!!!!!!! I love your stories!!!!!!!!! Love to talk with you .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
It amazes me how easily some people are pleased.

Bi47 - You are fantastic writer!!!!!!!! I love your stories!!!!!!!!! WTF?

The story seemed like it was written by a 12 Yr old.

Tony became Tom too many times to be from a fantastic writer!!!!

Should have called Tom Bob then you wouldn't have been so confused.

Very poor effort!!!!

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