All Comments on 'Gary and Jane Go on Holiday Ch. 01'

Decent so far. Don't make it into a cuck / slut tale please

Thank you for the feedback Mightyheart and I assure you it does not go in that direction

Nothing good happens to married couples on holiday in Africa or the Middle East. She will end up cucking her husband and he will enjoy watching her become a slut whore for anyone she wants. Writer, keep that Martian Whore Ray well away from this couple.

You know that's where this shit is headed, right? Don't waste your time.

Well for the record it was a decent tale.

Sadly as its your first story and you included this line in your prelude "All of my stories will be about a married couple who love each other deeply " which around here is generally the clue that a writer is setting up what we've all come to expect and its him diving into the deep end of the cuck pool and that includes wife sharing, as they are the same damned thing now. That line is usually there so the writer can fend off the readers who, correctly state, 90% of cuckings do NOT involve love or respect.

Keep it up but we'll see if you can keep from going where it always goes around here.

Decent start, hope you are submitting these daily as you have the story all written. Otherwise, readers lose interest and forget what has happened.

great so far looking forward to part 2.....

Glad to hear it isn’t a cuck tale

I’ve enjoyed what l read so far, keep up the good work.

Scores 5/5/thus far

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Voyeur is a cuck

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