All Comments on 'Gary and the Goth Girl'

by AlbericGrunnion

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LitCritLitCritabout 1 month ago

Good job! Nice story, a little too Hallmark sweet, but it works. Thank you.

evrtxnevrtxnabout 1 month ago

Beautiful tale. I wish more stars were available.

bleeepbleeepabout 1 month ago

Perfect. True love knows no boundary and asks no compromise. To be loved and accepted as one is, without judgement, is THE most fulfilling experience any person could have. The Author nailed this. Beautiful, moving and I may be just a bit jealous. Well done!!

stewartbstewartbabout 1 month ago

Everyone says at one time or another that it's not so hard ... anyone could write a story if they put their mind to it. But to craft it so it has an effect on the reader's perception ... a small touch on his soul ... an end result that the reader feels the better for having read it. That makes this story worth the read. Thank you.

AZTT2AZTT2about 1 month ago

Wonderful story

Pampapro1Pampapro1about 1 month ago

That’s what I’m looking for when I come to the romance category! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Beautiful story. 10 star worthy! I wish you would have described her project that everyone was so caught up with.

ThebiffThebiffabout 1 month ago

A wonderful story and the world would be a better place if people acted like the girls and the rest of the students. Thank you for a perfect blend of romance and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wow! Great story thank you.

lAnatomistelAnatomisteabout 1 month ago

Very Good. 5-stars, of course.

One minor niggle - Assistant Professors are lower rank than Associate Professors.

01Timber6701Timber67about 1 month ago

Awesome and amazing 5⭐️story, well done. The only thing missing is an epilogue for the wedding and living together and how many kids are involved 😉

KachinaDollKachinaDollabout 1 month ago

Stories don't come much better than this. Totally absorbing and beautifully written. You have a new fan here and I'm looking forward to reading your other stories. 5*

leatsubleatsubabout 1 month ago

This is a fantastic story, really liked the development of the "goth girl"

I could quibble about the faculty appointment, but someone has already addressed that. Also technically there could still be an issue with "harrassment". But in reality... who cares the story of their journey, and the school community's journey Far outweigh them. I look forward to reading more of your work,

Great Jib and Thanks

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 1 month ago

This was so good I am going to re-read this story now.

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 1 month ago

Even better the second time through.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 month ago

A most unusual romance!

5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wonderful story line. Detailed, yet the end was there before I knew it! Thank you.

SatyrDickSatyrDick7 days ago

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Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

PurplefizzPurplefizz5 days ago

Very offbeat and original, a touch overly sweet in places, but as it’s a romance I guess it’s par for the course. Definitely a 5⭐️ from me!

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