All Comments on 'Gem'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More of this please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Animal

Puppy? Cow? Pony?

pamelapetpamelapetalmost 5 years ago
wonderful

great story. ending up on Samatha's farm would not be a bad thing

CosmiccowboyqCosmiccowboyqabout 5 years ago
More!

I like this story because of the detail, some of the implications that I would like to see explored. Dehumanization is a fantasy so seeing how he looks at Gem as less and less human is a turn on. Definitely want to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Further training

I would like to see much more of gem's training as pony. Endurance training as well as field work. Samantha's place seems ideal as training site. Sam and gem's owner can take turns overseeing gem's work thus working her literally untill she drops from fatique.

Very nice story, please Keep up the good work.

Grey Master

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sequel?

Is there more to come? I'd love to read more about these characters

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