All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles - EGENIE Pt. 01'

You may be twisted but you are also very imaginative which as I have read, can be good or bad depending on your proclivities. Well done.

A magical, sex genie tale, my favorite kind, thank you, and please continue this series, loving it so far, ... ;-) TTFN

Your hero acts like a bastard. Please, let his personality improve

He is not a hero. He is a bastard. He has some redeeming qualities, but he is broken. Depression, Bi-polar, PTSD all combine to make him unstable. He may or may not be redeemed, but not a long while. He will fall farther down the rabbit hole and into the void. I hope you enjoy the ride though.

Story concept and most action, is good. Apparently you do not understand women's measurements though, "36 chest, 30 waist, 38 hips, 40D". 36" chest can NOT have a 40D, it is one, or the other, 36D-30-38, or 40D-36-38

Womens measurements of the chest and breast are done separately. The chest is measure under the breast giving the smaller number. The cup size is determined by the shape of the breast and the number size for the breast is based on the measurement of the breast across the nipple. So yes a 36" chest can have a 40 and depending on the actual mass of the breast could range from B to DD, Although, you will hardly ever see me put in anything over a DD. thank you for the comment though.

There is truly NO excuse for this bastards behaviour... Does he torture and kill puppies and kittens in his free time??!!

Markt63, as stated in previous comments, he is a bastard. There is absolutely no excuse for his behavior. He makes no excuse. He owns his problems. If he hadn't had a genie his life would have continued his slow downward spiral. Now he has a genie, it is a quick downward spiral and will be harder to stop. He has serious mental problems. He and the Genie have talked about them. He will not be redeemed and yes to cats, no to puppies and kittens and dogs. No one likes cats. Also, I would put them in the story, but Literotica would have me take them out anyway so why put it in.

Couldnt even finish the first page utterally repulsive and disgustingly disrespectful and disturbing.

So, out of curiosity I reread this chapter. I believe I put in a warning about this series right at the beginning. Though, the MC did not do anything repulsive, disgusting, disrespectful or disturbing that was not foretold by the MC's inner dialogue.

I know my comments are old but PTSD does not make you a sadist. Depression does not make you bat ass crazy. Reason I came to this story is that many people have commented on how well this is written to that I agree. But dude the reason you may have depression and ptsd is that you are a bastard LMAO.

Well, I can't really argue about being a bastard... They do say: write what you know.

Lost me with breast size.

Interesting, arousing, not sure it's wise to torture a djin, but you and I have similar fantasies, except for body type, ever consider September Carrino? Or Xlgirl Cherry Brady? Hitomi?