All Comments on 'Genie in a Bottle Ch. 02: The Second Wish'

Needs next part, what about 3rd wish?

So far the series has been fun to read. I'm looking forward to what you have in mind for the chapter 3.

I'm kind of hoping it doesn't end after only three chapters.

Very interesting concept. Personally, my first wish would have been to have an additional 100 wishes. When I saw that this chapter was in the Incest/Taboo category, I expected his mom, sister or aunt to be getting a piece of his giant cock. It was disappointing that the incest was only one line at the end of the chapter. Also, if he has a car, why was he running away from the bullies who were chasing him on bicycles. Couldn't he have avoided them by simply driving home? Given all that, I still gave the story five stars and a favorite point.

I look forward to seeing the next chapter.

Great story.. Love to read them...!! 5 Stars..!!

Since when did he get a job ,car or join the baseball team?

Wonderful story cant wait for The next chapter

This a good follow-up to your original story, although sad to think there may only be one more part as Elvira will have to return to her lamp soon. Still must say, for only three wishes his first two wishes were good ones!

The third wish is awaited...

Too short.

You're moving right along, great job, thanks for sharing your work.

I'm hoping that the third wish will torture the bully for the rest of his life.

No torture for the bully. His third wish should be for a billion dollars. And a never ending handful of debit cards.

Okay, the third and final wish, ... money, power, or better sex control? Time is running out; will Jason seek out someone for advice? the bully, transformed into a beautiful girl that wants to suck Jason's cock, ... maybe that would be a cool 3rd wish, ... and that the former bully would pay him some money each time he got to suck Jason off, ... oh well, carry on, .. ;-) ttfn