All Comments on 'Genie in a Bottle Ch. 04: Revenge'

Seems like the obvious solution is to wish to become bigger and stronger than Mike, but looking forward to where you take this!

I'm sorry to say but I have to rate this story only 3 stars.

There is way more potential in the storyline and characters as well as that almost every scene is written with haste. As if you wanted to the next scene as quickly as possible. Also the proportions are weird. For example, all the girls are going with extremly violant douchebags, but chat without a care in the world with the soul target of those douchebags.

Wish for people to believe anythibg he says when he wants them to, then tell the police that mike was trying to kill him or roped rachael or something. He could use that power in many different ways in the future too.

Seems as if the cop will be at least a moderately attractive lady cop, maybe extremely attractive, and Jason will have an entirely different reason to panic! All the same, looking forward to the continuation.

Need another chapter !

Why I hate reading a series where there is no conclusion. Almost two months since the last entry - were you going to finish, or has the muse left the "bottle"?

This was a waste of a good story idea. Jason is a small minded geek, with NO imagination!!!

Will he use / waste his final wish? or will he say, "yes officer" and go to jail, ... anyway, until the next chapter, see ya, ... ;-) ttfn

yes, the story is an description of an real smart hero. He knows what to do, how to do things right and how to choose wise desisions. How to tread a girl right and stand up for himself, too. A real keeper. Cheers!