All Comments on 'Genie Master Pt. 01'

You absolutely crushed it! Great dialog, details, world, and character building. Just enough to introduce us, and keep our interest. This is a challenging plot to write, and still sound original. You are a talented storyteller.

I like that you clearly stated at the beginning of the story, of the things that were to be expected. So I am going to give you a chance and see where you take this, but I do hope you won't lean to much into dominance. And make the harem more or less dependent on your protagonist, after all independent thought can make for a good story..

I love your story and can't wait for the next and following parts.

Ya got this old soldier hooked. 5 stars for those chapter. I often wonder if the Major nailed his genie, I think he did.

Nice! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Damn good storytelling! Looking forward to reading the rest.