All Comments on 'George and Martha Pt. 03'

Did you miss a part in between

I’ve enjoyed this entire series! Thanks for writing and continuing it to completion.

For the critics, it’s just their opinion and you arent defined by it. If they got a problem, don’t read it, write your own story and FUCK OFF. If you don’t have a

anything nice to say DONT SAY SHIT!

One note: you start this chapter off with baby Shannon here. Did we miss Martha’s pregnancy? Also how did she tell George she was pregnant? Was it sexy?

This is an awesome story!!! One of the best I have read! And, that would also apply even without the sex!!! I have read all your stories and enjoyed all! PLEASE continue!

Did you skip a chapter

You write a good story. Keep it up

Very well written, a different slice for every life. Cookie cutter crap it for sure ain't and that's one of the best parts!!

Keep on bringing your efforts, all the smarter folks will let you know where it falls and some positive/well formed thoughts regarding story lines will follow.

BRAVO!!!!!

You've handled the race 'issues' (how politically correct way to say bullshit) wonderfully. Very real. Very meaningful. And with much reserve.

Oh by the way, the story was great too. Then again, I am a sucker for Romances.

Thanks.

Great story! I like your style. Don't let the naysayers get you down. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Seems to have skipped a bit.

Please give us MORR

I agree with the previous poster. Seems to be missing a chapter. Baby? Sydney? Caryn?

R410a you have written a great story. if your next chapter continues with the brood becoming the owners of this enterprise, it would certainly be an entertaining end to a great story. I am sure there are lots of readers that would compliment you on such an ending,

Please write similar stories, I found this to be perfect. Thoroughly enjoyed your creation.

Please continue this story. Is such a sweet and loving story. As with any group you. can never please everyone.

No worries on the skipped chapter. Read 2.5 and came back to this one. Great story showing what can happen when everyone works together instead of focusing on what they look like.

Regarding the negative comments, just like in your story, there is no accounting for ignorance. I'm glad you followed your own advice and continued on.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing your hard work and imagination with us.

Regret that you received the negative comments on the first great chapter, but suggest that you must consider the sad sources. The old saying about pearls before swine would seem more than appropriate.

Loved your story

The neg reviews are incorrect

You rock an please continue doing what you do

Thanks

Don’t listen to negative fools. You write wonderfully and very good stories. Please keep writing.

....if they can’t take a joke. I’m tired of what is called racial bigotry. It’s not racial, it’s ethnic.

I came from a different demographic. I came from the military as a dependent. If you were truly “racial?” There was a peer group that would just that attitude. We wore green or tan. Our skin color? It ranged from bright white to the deepest sygian. And yes, I enjoyed correcting attitudes.

You keep writing as you will.

JIAM

A great all encompassing story of a slice of life that is common and uncommon at the same time.Thank You

Nope. You deserve the thank you for writing and posting this great story!

Another wonderful story from you

I read your comment at the end of your story. All I can say is that all of the fruits on the tress you've planted or the vegetables you are growing come out. Like some the ignorant readers think they should. After I finished your last "great" chapter. I went back to re-read You first chapter. I found it had nothing wrong with it. In fact, it was a very believable Start. The only thing that might have upset some of those that still think that a person's skin color shouldn't be mixed. Hopefully that hateful attitude will fade away some day. We can only hope. I thank you for another great story, it was really enjoyable. I'm on my way to the next on on your list. Keep up the great work.

dude i loved the stories. im getting ready to read the 4th chapter now

Forget those near-sighted readers. It's hard to criticize any part of your story. From the beginning, Metting of a disabled person, and the eventual love of her life. To the inhering of other disabled people and giving them a chance in their life to succeed. As far as George physically protecting his wife from Jurks. I would have done the same thing. Thank you for another GREAT STORY. Even better than those of yours I read so far, and that's saying a lot. Going to have to rate it 12 stars.

Start to finish, awesome! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Absolutely AWESOME story!

I understand That there are still people that carry that hateful felling that people of deferent colors should not mix. The only problem with that is that when two people become interested in each other, their hart takes over, and it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks. rather others, black, and white. Is this changing? (Maybe) However, your story brings it out, I applaud you. It deserves 15 stars

In this time and the way people are brought up, your going to find those that can't understand mixed murages. Your story is as great as all of your stories. Keep up the grate work. Another 15 stars.

You sometimes get bad comments from readers for one reason or another. Personally I enjoyed the hole story as usual I give it 15 stars.

I can't see how anyone could complain about any of the chapters, it was as usual a great story. Easy 15- star story