All Comments on 'Get Paid To Watch And Play'

Nice premise.

Good plot.

Nice scenario.

But...

She gets paid to watch them have sex, right? There should have been an 'offer' as part of the pitch to get her to agree.

If she was too nervous to touch her pussy that first time, as ltast she should have rubbed her legs together. Or reached up and squeezed a breast or two.

And you need an editor/copyreader.

You keep switching between tenses all within the same sentence.

You wrote: "...visit the gymn..." GYM

You wrote: "...Jenny needs to be hear for this..." HERE

You wrote: "You alright?" ALL RIGHT

I hope the story continues!

Four stars.

This whole site is about voyeurs when you think about it. We watch others. We watch ourselves. We just write about it.