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She was probably hoping that I was the lighter sleeper, and that I would come to investigate, so that she could have her 'private' moment.
- "I'll go." said Kira.
- "Let's go together." I suggested.
When Kira and I entered the kitchen together, Anita realized that she wasn't going to get her way. Not this time.
In the morning, we prepared a solid breakfast for our guests. Millie looked like shit - she hadn't slept well. She asked if she could have a moment of my time.
- "I'm so sorry." she said. "This is not what I was expecting."
- "I know, Millie. You're a good friend."
- "I'm sending her for counselling as soon as we get home."
- "That may not be a bad idea."
Millie looked me in the eye. "Are we okay? You and me?"
- "Always." I said.
Kira drove our guests to the airport. It was a Saturday, so I stayed home and cleaned up. I also prepared a lunchtime snack for my partner.
When she returned, Kira didn't look particularly angry.
- "All is well?"
- "We cleared the air." she said.
- "You and Millie still okay?"
- "Oh, yes. That was never in doubt."
- "And you and I?"
Kira grinned. "Is that a reference to 'Yes'? Should I put the album on?"
I had to laugh. "Only if you want to make love before lunch."
- "Always." she said.
*****
THE END
I really enjoyed it, as I said on an earlier part some of it seemed to be just you writing to show off what you read or have some knowledge on, but this part wasn't like that.
I found the ending just lacking that bit of a spark that the rest of it had.
"I... I wanted to apologise, Ben...."
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"Why?"
"Huh? Why what?"
"Why do you want to apologize? It doesn't *sound* like you mean it; and you're not acting like you are sorry in that it seems you're exhibiting the same behavior."
(Shocked pause)
"So, again, why?"
Amazing story. So many aspects and characters can be utilised properly with proper plot maybe, there should be a sequel with few years of time skip
This didn't go the way I expected in the first part of chapter 1, but the setup for where you took it was very good. It was a great story and you earned those 5 stars from me.
Just read this story for what must be the 5th or 6th time, since it was published. It's not too deep a story, but it keeps touching me every time!
I’d like to address some lame comment about beta male and beta female… this story is a great short read. The characters don’t need to be label. Perhaps if so-n-so didn’t recycle misused trigger words and sought reading material More to their liking we could support the author we like without dragging down the ones that we don’t.
So in the end the Beta Male hooks up with the Beta Female? Makes sense to me, though why it deserved 4-5 chapters is a mystery? I have nothing against Beta personalities per se but taking such an in-depth look at their mild mannered plod to mediocrity seems too much like literary torture.
Apart from the action with Brynn, which I found to be too far fetched, I thoroughly enjoyed this story - so much so that I read it through in one sitting. I'm also a sucker for a happy ending, and you gave me one of those as well, thank you.