by romantis
Lovely read. Nice to read stories that have a nice character build-up and then a sweet part 2.
Thanks for sharing.
It's a great read; really interesting and well-written. I love the electricity between Danny and Moh and can't wait to read how that develops. It's obvious that Danny wants it and I strongly suspect that he wants more. I wonder what will happen when he wakes up with morning wood?!
I love the sweetness pouring out of this story, still managing to be sexy as hell. I confess I lean towards the rough, but I'm a total sucker for romantic/tender/lighthearted stories too! i appreciate you! definitely something different, your vocab is great, not repetitive at all, and I can bet you're having fun writing as much as I am reading it.
This is really great. I love the affection between Danny and Moh and the easy trust with which they let Moh into their group.
Wonderful story with great descriptions of the hot guys and all the sex play! Bravo! Please keep writing!
Thank you so much everyone!
I am working hard on Chapter 3. It will probably take a bit longer than the previous one. It is longer and more than pivotal Chapter 2. I expect to be ready to submit it at some point next week.
And @sedgee, you are correct, I AM having fun writing. I mean, sometimes it sucks, but generally it is a lot of fun :D
Loved it. Especially the little teases of past events like the reference to Danny’s poor technique handling circumcised dicks
Not nearly enough stories include the words "Show our guest your penis."
This has the makings pf a excellent story. I look forward to reading the rest of the series.