All Comments on 'Getting Payback Ch. 06'

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shadrachtshadracht9 months ago

I really want to like this, but it's all so 90210, and everyone's lying and tricking everyone else. And nothing bad ever happens to fucking dick and Rebecca. It's hard to see the mmc jerked around for chapter after chapter. Can't you just give him a clean win once in a while?

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey9 months ago

I just read all of the chapters and LOVE IT! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Kind of hate how vague everyone is being. No one is honest. The mc is being indecisive as well as angela. And somehow everybody blames the mc but no one else can be critized by him? Where is the payback? It is more like getting betrayed.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19817 months ago

I only want to see another chapter to see if the Mc gets tired of the shit and quits them all as far as Amy and Rebecca goes there both in the blame Amy set it up and Rebecca clearly showed she didn't love this mark guy for she willingly spread her legs and let another man cum in her and the way she said to start a family makes it sound she's not on birth control Amy clearly showed she can't be trusted nor can Rebecca and she is not afraid to use black mail to get what she wants from that's not a loving girlfriend the sister being reluctant is understandable but she is going to have realize someone is going to get hurt no matter what this dick guy just needs the hell beat out of him yet mark seems to be a bit of coward on that situation which makes it hard to believe that he really did beat him up in school just by his actions in this story Jennifer is hiding something from everyone so she can't be trusted until what ever she is hiding is out in the open as far as his mom goes she's not a damn parent otherwise she would not be willing to side against her son no matter what also Mike has showed he isn't a man cause he is caving into Rebecca yet again like a idiot when she has no proof that he saw Angela get out of his car yet he has all the proof he needs of being a slut and fucking some other man who isn't mark all he has to do is show the video to everyone and it will ruin her no chance of ever having a true relationship again cause no man would have anything to do with her anymore it will also show what kind mom his mother really is right now she's not showing to be much of 1 also brings up the question how did his sister know what she was doing behind marks back and the way it clearly stated she finally got home this TIME around midnight knotice how time is capitalized for that says she's made it a habit in coming back late which clearly tells me that her fucking another man behind marks back has happened plenty of times before another chapter is needed to show if mark is actual man or is the writing on the wall going to remain ture and he be a cuck bitch like it seems if he is going to be it's going be no wonder he can't have a girlfriend that wants to be with him because no woman wants a cuck bitch they want a man as far his parents goes well it's the same for them as why they treat him the way they do mostly cause there ashamed of him and mad at themselves for not raising a man but a cuck bitch instead again no woman wants a cuck bitch they want a man a real man and so far that is something mark isn't showing himself to be

SmellerSmeller7 months ago

I searched specifically for Payback and 6 chapters in there is none just drama, drama and more drama.

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