All Comments on 'Getting Their Full Attention'

by HerHind

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

you write like a 13yr old kid..... wait until you are old enough to know

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 1 year ago

A correction to the Anonymous commentor:

A 13 year old kid who has never been anywhere near a female or an anatomy book.

raraewriterraraewriterover 1 year ago

Hmmm, five five and 170. Ok. Fun and funny.

HerHindHerHindover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks all.

Was intended to be fun and funny, and a bit juvenile too. Looks like I laid on the juvenile a bit heavily.

BTW: Nothing in there not physically possible with a little practice and concentration.

zededd2000zededd200011 months ago

Well, it's not a bad story. The style is appealing, I just don't think the pregnancy tag is warranted.

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