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"Now go take a cold shower before Keira comes," James suggests his tone light and teasing.
"Sure thing, Daddy," I respond with a chuckle.
"Don't forget to doll up tonight before meeting me in my bedroom," James says, his voice carrying a hint of anticipation and playfulness.
"Any particular request, Daddy?" I ask a playful glint in my eyes.
"Surprise me," Daddy remarks with a playful smirk. "Before you go, I've got to say, your ass looks good."
To be continued...
I promptly published it upon completion. As my schedule is currently occupied, I welcome anyone willing to assist with the editing to kindly reach out via email.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoThe language here is way too flowery and colorful. It’s an overwhelming amount of description, leaving not enough to human imagination. I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs before giving up. People just do not talk about themselves or others like that, no matter how fantastical.
Anonymous8 months agoThe first few paragraphs are straight up Homeric. Had to slow myself down so I didn't get distracted by the prose.
aglex599 months agoGood story, you are doing very well, keep going and have some confidence in yourself, it is awesome.
