All Comments on 'Ghost in the Graveyard'

You forgot to mention where that cemetary was, i've been known to stroll thru them as well. hehehe...

It was a good story and I enjoyed it. Thanks

and if children happen because of this night, what kind are they?

Sexy and poetic.

Tastefully erotic and very sensitive.

I truly enjoyed this. Excellent characters for such a short story.

Very well written. I loved the story. Very touching.

Very touching. Very Romantic. Although tragedy and sorrow is involved(I'm referring to Alanna who unfortunately joined her creator) but never mind that comment. Perfectly a true love story.

your storie turned me on and made me cry all at the same time . it's a storie i will never forget. thank you for writeing it.

some of the best writing i've read. Keep on going and I'd better see a novel from you soon.....you're that good.

That was great ! One of the best short stories I have ever read .......the sex was tastefully done ....wonderful !

Stephen J

It was a sad story yet it was a good one

Had some potential. Better then the last piece of garbage I looked at.

Biggest complaints going forward- Way to Short, Too sappy/ Romantic, No backstory about the ghost he fucked senseless. Can't really jerk off to something like this!

What I enjoyed- Good spelling, I was able to visualize the story, it got me hard at least!