All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
excellent

you've got me hooked. Please keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
DAMN

Damn, damn, damn. That was a helluva place to stop.

MsJulieDollMsJulieDollover 19 years ago
Another masterpiece

Stephen is written a fabulous tale weaving erotic sex and a truly compelling story. Like all great writers the end of his chapters leave you breathless for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Whoa!!

Awsome. How am I supposed to sleep now? Please please don't let his computer crap out now. We need more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I love this series

It was indeed a heck of a place to stop but I figure it's your perogative as the author. I do like the plot development but only one sex scene in this chapter. Looking forward to seeing more powers develop and how he handles them, for good, bad or a mixture.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
amazing

I am not a fan of erotica... but this story is awesome. It's provocitive, sexxy, fun, and kicks ass. Please keep writing... I'm on the edge of my seat.

Kai KenobiKai Kenobialmost 19 years ago
pure exellence

i have to say your writing is exellent i couldnt stop reading. Now i have read many stories on literotica and other sites but yours is by far the most likley to succeed

i personally think they are just as involving as any other Anne rice book

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
No words

Don't stop writing. Ever.

/Fredrik

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
could have gone differently

i was half expecting a rage fuck of the water fairy from stephen. could have pulled it off too, infuriating Set for soiling his girl

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hooked!!

Your writing is amazing. You should consider writing a book for sure!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
You REALLY need an editor

The story is great but please, please, please get an editor. The spelling is atrocious.

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