All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 07'

The story is great but please, please, please get an editor. The spelling is atrocious.

Your writing is amazing. You should consider writing a book for sure!

i was half expecting a rage fuck of the water fairy from stephen. could have pulled it off too, infuriating Set for soiling his girl

Don't stop writing. Ever.

/Fredrik

i have to say your writing is exellent i couldnt stop reading. Now i have read many stories on literotica and other sites but yours is by far the most likley to succeed

i personally think they are just as involving as any other Anne rice book

I am not a fan of erotica... but this story is awesome. It's provocitive, sexxy, fun, and kicks ass. Please keep writing... I'm on the edge of my seat.

It was indeed a heck of a place to stop but I figure it's your perogative as the author. I do like the plot development but only one sex scene in this chapter. Looking forward to seeing more powers develop and how he handles them, for good, bad or a mixture.

Awsome. How am I supposed to sleep now? Please please don't let his computer crap out now. We need more!!!

Stephen is written a fabulous tale weaving erotic sex and a truly compelling story. Like all great writers the end of his chapters leave you breathless for more.

Damn, damn, damn. That was a helluva place to stop.

you've got me hooked. Please keep it coming