All Comments on 'Gifted'

im not a literary critic just a fan of reading erotic stories, enjoyed the story line would like to see possibly a couple of sequels to it

Loved it. When you gave him his powers via a biological testing substance, I got wary of what your focus was. Unknown Biological Substances is so cliche, but you made it work by not calling attention to it and allowing the story to just continue without over-explaning this and that. Great ending, very original story from a cliche reason. And I mean cliche in a good way.

It was great

These are the kind of stories I love to read because in reality they happened to

Me in a diff way.Thank you

Good flow. I think it can go far. Good job so far!

Need to continue, you've got us hooked. Need to explore the gal that was at clinic. Tho I see his getting hung up on her... Possible. Keep the story going, you've got a great start.