All Comments on 'Gifted Pt. 01'

Because every underaged person he cane in co tact with had the morals of a cloistered nun.

That’s the problem with stories like this: they aren’t consistent with how people behave.

You really need a new editor.

And again a story that is ruined by the guy having a 10 inch cock

This was my first attempt at a story, sorry to didn't enjoy it.

Hey. This was fun. Enjoyed the butt stuff, great first story.

I thought you did just fine. Flesh it out a bit. Take your time going from point A to point B. As far as realistic or not, well it's a story. Go for it. Look forward to reading what you do next.

First time writer and they want you to be Tom Clancy. Just keep improving.

I appreciate those of you who liked my first story, thank you!

Enjoyed the story but like one of the previous comments said, you need an editor or at least a new one. Hope to see you continue the story.

I found it was decent of a story. Plot was... Eh. Pretty much nonexistent. A found a couple grammatical mistakes as well.

However what threw me off was that how could the guy hold off until his 18th birthday to do his mom? Also, I felt like it was a pretty bland story. No description of the setting or of the scenes much besides the main action.

Overall it was pretty mediocre. Your definitely could do better but it's a good start. Hope to see the next installment

Loved it can’t wait for part 2

I am trying to find an editor to help me, I get it I am having difficulty with this though.

Good story

Not a bad 1st story. Hope you continue this series. Thanks for sharing it and keep up the great work. 5 stars

Please do continue with this story

great story more please

Needs part two.