All Comments on 'Gina's Sport'

You made Gina's dialogue stilted to make her more foreign and thus exotic. However, it came across as simply annoying. The wam-bam fast pacing worked. The physically overpowering female was sexy. Your closing paragraph was a bit melodramatic, the whole nothing else matters is worn thin. To have him excited but fearful would have fit better. Don't have him magically loose himself to her. Give us a taste of his emotional change over.

Started promising but faded once they got physical.

BTW, there is no way a female body builder in competition trim could get her mouth anywhere near her nipple.