All Comments on 'Girl Friday'

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gunmakergunmakerover 1 year ago

Excellent! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice to see you writing again as its been a few years since your last story.

DINGDONG33DINGDONG33over 1 year ago

Have to remember this treatment best I have cum accross. Keep up the good writing and stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good premise.

But really rushed sex.

No foreplay. No teasing. No slow undressing.

Not much in the way of dialog during the sex.

Too rushed to orgasm.

Two stars.

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