by HornyKip
The title is transphobic and fetishy. Referring a a trans man as "too cute to be a full man" is transphobic and gross. The silk panties thing is really weird and reeks of fetishism, as does every description that has anything to do with Steffan being trans.
Either do better, or don't write about trans people.
I really enjoyed reading and I am of the opinion your story was not insulting in any way. A sweet story about two people falling in love plus some hot sex scenes.
That was a great story . The transphobic comment was pathetic .the person that is criticizing should learn people can come in all shapes n sizes .it was a sweet story
Eh, the story was sweet and tender, but I have to agree that, while Steffan was written as a lovely character, the pondering over Steffan being “too cute to be a man” does come off as fetishistic and what chasers would write. Buttt, it was sweet how you hammered in the issue of transphobes saying “just be a fem gay man or butch lesbian” rather than just accepting trans people as trans, so thank you OP.