All Comments on 'Girlfriend Interview Ch. 01'

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ChefofthefutureChefofthefuture9 months ago

Where is the rest of the story, it just stopped…

LimnophileLimnophile9 months agoAuthor

@Chefofthefuture - This is only the first chapter. Future chapters will be published when they are ready. Thanks for reading.

Poacher11Poacher119 months ago

After reading the first chapter looking forward to how the story develops

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I stopped reading when he said his name and titles. What king (or queen) has deputized him to run what distant country? The last viceroy I can remember is Mountbatten presiding over the debacle of partitioning India after WWII.

What a load of pretentious twaddle.

LimnophileLimnophile9 months agoAuthor

@Anonymous , who complained about the 'Viceroy' - This is entertainment, not a history book. Vampires, dragons, space aliens, and superheroes are far from realistic; but hundreds of millions watch the movies. If you require 100 percent plausibility, do both of us a favor and quit reading my stories. In this one our main character is a bit of a perv, and profoundly prone to pompous puffery. A future chapter explains 'viceroy' and his many other appellations in a humorous way, if you have a little patience.

WoodencavWoodencavabout 2 months ago

Has the beginnings of a very interesting storey! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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I can only publish about a third of my works here. You can read the rest at https://wolfpub.org/contributors/list_items.php?cid=10424 . . . I also highly recommend the stories written by my friend 'CreepyUnclePete' https://wolfpub.org/contributors/list_items.php?cid=10610

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