All Comments on 'Girlfriend with Testing Device Ch. 19'

by Razmagurk

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darkrage6darkrage6over 4 years ago
great story

really compelling and sexy story, can't wait to see what happens next. Is Elizabeth going to return Ellen back to normal out of guilt?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

kind of a stupid story needs to be in the garbage

darkrage6darkrage6over 4 years ago
don't listen to that moron

ignore that anonymous moron, this story is great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Is this finally the end of the "Elizabeth Arc"?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Man, Elizabeth is just... such a huge sociopath (or psychopath, I always mix the two up) Not once does she ever show actual remorse over her actions, and only seems to care about any of it when Evan directly confronts her on any of it, as if she's only trying to appease him.

This story has some sexy scenes sure, and it's interesting enough to continue reading, but all this drama and lack of basic human empathy aren't very erotic.

I'll continue reading, you're actually incredibly skilled at the craft, but I hope things improve, both erotically and also just emotionally. Things are pretty bummer

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