All Comments on 'Girlfriends Ch. 03'

by married_but_curious

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ThreeWivesThreeWives3 months ago

I felt that the focus on blackness took away from the story. A beautiful woman is beautiful, no matter her color. The need to iinsert desired pregnancy and commit to a lifetime was ridiculous.

Addicted098Addicted098about 2 months ago

The way tension has been created between Hunter and alexis and their sex is written well. But the hyperbole about Alexis being a virgin then sleeping with sister's BF and wanting to get pregnant with him and wanting to get pregnant right after 1st sex is a bit too much to believe. Maybe that coud have been saved as a possibility or a hint.

Also, since this is marked as a threeway, it woud have been cool to see Cheri rewarding to Hunter with a quickie at the end there.

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