All Comments on 'Give & Take Among Friends Ch. 09'

Another author who thinks he is good enough to get away with dropping an occasional chapter of his multi chapter story into LW. Based on the scores of his last LW dump, this isn’t working.

With such a low score, not going to bother going back to read the rest of the chapters.

Not chasing any writer around Literotica, mostly because few of you write decently enough to make it worthwhile.

What a bunch of selfish characters with no self control. Why bother even getting married if everyone screws everyone else? Enjoy the STDs folks.

Soon Eli (with Rachel's help) will add Lila to his far flung harem, Rachel will again be locked up with Mike, and Dan will be left paying all Lila's bills while getting nothing from her other than complaints.

Soon, Lila will be added to Eli's harem, Rachel will continue to screw Mike, and Dan will be left with nothing.

An easy one. Thanks.

he was the cuck in this story since the start

What a trainwreck of nonsensical, lust driven relationships. Good luck with that...