All Comments on 'Give In'

This is beautifully written and so hot! I love how you manage to convey the eroticism of her emotional/mental struggle, and the way he controls her, not with physical force, but by manipulating her own desire. Write more, please! You have an intriguing imagination and a fine way with words.

It is so rare to find a story like it. I think your two stories are the first ones I would actually come back to the site to read again and again. They are HOT! Keep writing!

I'll be looking out for more(:

<3 L.