by edgemeendlessly
Good premise.
But seriously and severely rushed.
Needed much more of the dialog in the beginning. Needed her to force him to tell her what he imagined being done to him.
And her breasts are NOT 36D. The 36 is the chest size. It has nothing to do with the breast size. A, B, C, D, DD, etc. are cup sizes.
And does any male ever think about his cock being a 'member'?
Or his asshole as a 'gloryhole'?
And there's no involvement with her breasts. Why? She's on top. All she has to do is lean over to he can reach them with his mouth. And, perhaps, make him think about how good it would feel if she wrapped them around his cock and had him fuck them.
Needed much longer edging of his cock. And his balls. And needed her warning him about cumming without permission.
Ad it ended much too abruptly.
Three stars.