All Comments on 'Giving up Control'

Really liked this short piece and the “her taking control” focus; nice deviation from the norm. And sustained throughout whether her or his POV. Anonymity perfect for this short highly erotic scene. One complaint. When she asks: “Can, I?” No need for following sentence: “Tap my legs or side for me to lighten up. Touch my arms, wrist, or hands and I'll let go. Repeat it so I know you understand." Distracts from the erotic flow of the scene you create. Would appear they are lovers/know one another. 5 stars no matter. Hope you continue to share. Thanks.

I am a switch, and it is fun to give up control occasionally. We try to do it once a month if possible.