by proseinagarden
One of the most erotically intense pieces I’ve enjoyed in ages beginning with leisurely morning wake up sex through crazy, fun moments in the car and ending with unbelievably beautiful love making. You have captured the way for the reader to feel what exists between your two uniquely intriguing main characters — the dialogue, the banter, phrasing and pace. Did I say dialogue: “I know...you showed me yesterday...”.
“Her dark eyes were dancing with the words she wasn't saying and she kissed me.”
So good. And so hot, as usual.
A garden of earthly delights indeed.
I suspect you are actually a pro writer of some kind and literotica is your outlet to write things you’d really like to put in your books, but can’t.
Geez! I like when stuff gets quoted back to me! Thanks guys! Bringing both series around slowly…hopefully it’ll have an epic ending *fingers crossed*
A brilliant piece of sustained erotic writing, the best I have found on this site. I really felt I was the narrator.
So far beyond so much of the trash here.
I endorse the earlier comments and this will be firm favourite for the foreseeable future.
Just when I think, "She's hit her peak," you surprise me again with the intensity and thoughtfulness behind your words. Each story adds more depth to your characters and their relationship. I'm looking forward to watching their relationship develop...and I can't wait for Moriah to spend the day in those vibrating panties.