All Comments on 'Go-Go Control Ch. 01'

by assislave

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LovesumDsLovesumDsabout 5 years ago
Great Story

I love Asian Fem Dom and this story had superb interaction and scenes.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What happend next?

Nice story. Let us know how it continued.

Did it develop into a relationship or did she just take your money?

One last thing: Does the story take place in Pattaya Thailand? :)

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
Not at all bad for a first offering

I enjoyed this, although the broken English - for which you gave an adequate explanation - became a little tiresome; you also used 11 &'s in your copy and that is not good practice.

A good story overall - I look forward to reading More Control - thank you. Four stars for a good effort.

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