All Comments on 'God App Ch. 01'

Really great!

has potential, but i'll reserve opinion til i read more

Fun. Nice twist on the interfering higher power.

Nice story I enjoyed it please keep writing

I loved it. Keep it up!

This setup is incredible and i just need a LOT more

Let the chaos and creampies ensue

Looking forward to the next chapter

Happy with everything about this except for the "dumb teenage girl" bit. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Here's to hoping he makes himself gorgeous, it's more fun when the women are the ones being tempted by beauty.

great start! a little short for my tastes, but you have a very good premise to start with. can't wait to see where it goes.

I am waiting. Yo!

Nice start...hope it goes as a nice series

A very exciting and potential filled start. I'm sure I'm not the only one eagerly awaiting more!

Great start! Love the premise, and your writing style. More please!

This one is going to get interesting.

Clever, though I preferred the non-teenage Alexandria more. Looking forward to more

Agreed on losing the teenager/bimbo thing - it’s much better when she’s a smart, outraged goddess forced into obedience.

Looking forward to the next chapter, though the 'dumb teenage girl' thing can go

Enjoying this, what an imaginative scenario, can't wait to see how it develops.

Admittedly, as an author, my characters are my own. I do agree with the others though, that she should not be a bimbo, but an angry goddess that cant fight. However, I also know that in your universe once a core change has been made, it can't be changed. Honestly though, it is still an excellent story, and a bimbo goddess is not that big of a deal. Keep up the good work!

Cute story! 5 BIG ONES!

Great start, looking forward to reading the next chapter!

I thought this was going to be a great ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ star story until he turn her into a teen/ bimbo he’s just another wanker who uses and abuses the power he’s been given. Really Disappointed actually….⭐️⭐️⭐️

Excellent work. Just started reading this story am going to binge through the rest!