All Comments on 'God App Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Really great!

w8ingnoww8ingnowalmost 2 years ago

has potential, but i'll reserve opinion til i read more

BiceptualBiceptualalmost 2 years ago

Fun. Nice twist on the interfering higher power.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice story I enjoyed it please keep writing

RiskyPawnRiskyPawnalmost 2 years ago

I loved it. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This setup is incredible and i just need a LOT more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Let the chaos and creampies ensue

DaddydonthurtmeDaddydonthurtmealmost 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter

TheDrowTheDrowalmost 2 years ago

Happy with everything about this except for the "dumb teenage girl" bit. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

gaigousgaigousalmost 2 years ago

Here's to hoping he makes himself gorgeous, it's more fun when the women are the ones being tempted by beauty.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

great start! a little short for my tastes, but you have a very good premise to start with. can't wait to see where it goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am waiting. Yo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice start...hope it goes as a nice series

geniuspenisgeniuspenisalmost 2 years ago

A very exciting and potential filled start. I'm sure I'm not the only one eagerly awaiting more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start! Love the premise, and your writing style. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This one is going to get interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Clever, though I preferred the non-teenage Alexandria more. Looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Agreed on losing the teenager/bimbo thing - it’s much better when she’s a smart, outraged goddess forced into obedience.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter, though the 'dumb teenage girl' thing can go

crankenheimercrankenheimeralmost 2 years ago

Enjoying this, what an imaginative scenario, can't wait to see how it develops.

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthoralmost 2 years ago

Admittedly, as an author, my characters are my own. I do agree with the others though, that she should not be a bimbo, but an angry goddess that cant fight. However, I also know that in your universe once a core change has been made, it can't be changed. Honestly though, it is still an excellent story, and a bimbo goddess is not that big of a deal. Keep up the good work!

RanDog025RanDog02511 months ago

Cute story! 5 BIG ONES!

KuanyangKuanyang11 months ago

Great start, looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Aussie1951Aussie195110 months ago
What a load of shit

I thought this was going to be a great ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ star story until he turn her into a teen/ bimbo he’s just another wanker who uses and abuses the power he’s been given. Really Disappointed actually….⭐️⭐️⭐️

SouperKev777SouperKev7777 months ago

Excellent work. Just started reading this story am going to binge through the rest!

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