All Comments on 'Golem'

If only it were so. ;- ) Well written and a novel concept. Good job.

I liked the notion of an earthborn woman. LOL

Good luck.

. . and saved the money. I wasn't doing anything.

Don't suppose the demon that put you off-course had Rumpled horns by any chance?

Liked it lots.

So I did read the whole thing. The wildness of your imagination kept me reading, and the mixed golem-cyborg angle was clever (Prof. Wald's accent too). You're going to have to do worse than this to win last place, I'm afraid.

You have a wild and vivid imagination. I'm impressed! I agree, you will have to do much worse to win last Og. Very clear and well written, you were able to keep me reading this strange tale. Kisses and hugs for a job well done! ~Minx

good execution. but does Elaine really want to be co-dominate?

if for no other reason than the originality of this piece. a really good read!!.

This was a wild story but the originality of it was what made it so good.

It is already late evening. I read this story about the father and his two daughters in one go.

You wrote in your biography:

"My stories are meant as pure jack off material, not morality plays...... Enjoy if it's your thing."

Smiling. It worked.

The story is wonderful, direct, open and very hot. And I can imagine how beautiful and how loving these daughters can be. It is a horny fairy tale for me.

Thanks for that.

High five.

Best wishes from Germany.

So sorry.

I think I put a comment to another story below your story. Sorry about that.