All Comments on 'Golf Foursome, et al. Story 01 Ch. 02'

Good job

What a pair of sanctimonious cretins they deserve each other

Enjoyed your previous.post, but this.one is not for me at all.

New things start exciting but eventually become repetitive and routine. Trading for it by not having children that care about you, or a partner that really loves you, would leave you feeling pretty empty most days.

Nice story. Went its own way. Everyone got what they wanted, but for some that wasn't for the better.

Then as far as I can see you pissed it all away. Good for him to find love, even with an attorney ;-}. but to let her off of the hook with all of her lying, cheating and stealing... No way in hell, should have burned her to the ground. Then to keep being the slut and moving in with one of her cheaters. Nope, good story telling, but I'm just not buying the ending. You had us primed for a classic BTB and then you let us down, what about the promise made to Kate at the first meeting? I'm always up for reconcilliation when it's earned but just letting her off of the hook with a simple divorce isn't what I signed up for. Signed: BTW

Skort's are so hott. Hard to beat a hott MILF in a short sexxxy skort. Another awesome story. I just can't see her children excepting their mother having Dave around in any shape or form.

Great ending. He got the hot lawyer!!!

I admit to being a horndog but even I scrolled past paragraph after paragraph of sex descriptions - too much of a good thing is too much. Nitpicking over, I like the story and the plot tho maybe not the ending as I don't believe in stoning the sinner - me usually being the sinner!

I am happy so happy to see the author has given sandy a happy ending. So what she shat on her husband's life, cheated like a twopenny whore, she truly deserved happiness.

Maybe I'm some sort of p**v**t but damn, this story was hot and I would be proud to be Dave!

Very good BTB story, well crafted thanks!

D.S.

Good story, would have been better for me if he had destroyed the slut and her boyfriends, every which way he could,

Umm in real life a wife of 24 years doesn't suddenly get addicted to foursomes because of watching porn. Ick.

@ anon "Umm" : This isn't real life.

Mammals are expert at spotting adultery and cheating behavior. Trust your instincts.

In my experience, a woman would never describe her sexual actions using all those porn terms. Few women talk like that. She'd never go into the extreme detail when she was confessing to her husband. I know it's titillating for some readers to hear sex described that way, but it's very unrealistic. Beyond that, this story mostly leaves out the emotional journey of the characters, not to mention the certain PTSD-type aftermath. It was an interesting take on this theme, but the characters never came alive for me.