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- COMMENTS
The_John_Yossarian7 months agoThese characters seem kind of..... off. Their moods flip all over the place, and they are eerily alike. Think bipolar siblings. She challenges him with something, and he responds in a way that goes against any kind of logic. In writing, this is bending the character to the plot, even though it makes no sense. This is like the guy in the zombie flick who loses his head and runs through the hoard of ghouls to get away--makes no sense, but it advances the plot. I made it through part two, but the story is arcing in the prime direction of "crazy town." That seems to be a pattern with your work.
HighBrowabout 1 year agoThe Femdom agitprop doesn’t really make much sense, but we are finally into actual cuckolding. I wasn’t expecting our cuck to be such a pushover.
rfnks2002almost 2 years agoyes it has plenty of emotion but what a disrespectful bitch Lori turned out to be. best thin Kyle could do is pack up leave the bitch to fuck everything she can find.
tkh3nkey2110about 2 years agoI liked this story a lot mostly for the strong emotions that you have been able to convey. Ditto the comments made by Seangeist. I like the cuckolding scenario because it is fraught with emotion. I don't really understand Lori's need to humiliate Kyle. What he did before they met is really none of her business. Although she is using those premarital experiences as leverage to get what she wants it could really permanently harm their relationship. Her whole attitude would have put me off and had me packing up and leaving for home. Option three on the table? Maybe.
maddictover 2 years agoThat will be one hell of a fishing tale. Kyle, do you have the courage to share when you get home. The choice might not be yours alone
