All Comments on 'Good Bye My Love'

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WhenIm64WhenIm64almost 2 years ago

I enjoyed the series of stories. My only regret is that their titles and organization in your story page makes it difficult to read them sequentially. I have a feeling I missed at least one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was one of the best stories i have ever read on this site. The driving home scene, was very emotional to me the reader. You captured it perfectly. No eaay task as a writer.

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

We should have to guess which stories to read, in which order. If it's multipart, make it clear, with them tied together on your story list.

dmallorddmallordalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Sequenced Readings:

https://literotica.com/s/its-all-right-daddy-mommy-knows

https://literotica.com/s/wicked-fulfills-a-farm-boys-dream

https://literotica.com/s/clouds-and-rain-an-asian-thing

https://literotica.com/s/tattooed-and-screwed

https://literotica.com/s/wickeds-hospital-drama

https://literotica.com/s/butt-be-careful-what-you-wish-for

https://literotica.com/s/good-bye-my-love

Sparrow69Sparrow69almost 2 years ago

I commented awhile back on this, but for some reason it was never posted, so I’m going to try and rewrite it as best as I can.

First off, I want to thank for using my letter idea. It really made me so happy to see it come to life in your story, and you did a wonderful job on it, and how it was found.

I hope you might consider spin-off stories on Wicked and Doctor Dani, as well as farm-boy John Deer with mom and his sister, and perhaps Wicked making a special appearance... Also, I’d like to see more of Wicked and daddy.

I really enjoyed the series; sadly, I was confused as others on the order, and I had to go back and re-read it in order including the ones I missed. In doing so I got a lot more out of the series.

I could have done without the tattoo story, but that is a personal preference. The sculptured female form can be the most beautiful thing on the planet, but scaring it with tattoos… I just don’t get it, but like I said it’s a personal preference.

Best wishes and keep writing. 5-Stars on every part.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Unfulfilling, no love, no passion… just fell off the cliff. Ugh

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