All Comments on 'Goo'd Girls Pt. 10'

I haven't read it yet, but thank you for adding the corruption tag! I was able to find it quicker this time!

"The Minotaur scoffed. 'That is the Fable Minotaur,' she said. 'The First, who carved these caverns in search of an exit. The ever-wondering." Was this supposed to be the ever-wandering? Or is it correct and he's ever-wondering whether he'll find a way out. Either way works, but ever-wondering is more humorous.

"Then, Ozloth watched as Dayna's half-human mace emerged from the slime," mace?

"something spanked in Gabriel as Dayna recognised as an orgasm ripped through him;" something sparked?

"She saw flashes of different positions; Gabriel behind Amber, fucking her doggy-style as her held her hair in his grip;" as he held her hair in his grip?

"It hadn't been long ago she'd done the same, pon learning that Sonja had survived that first fight. " upon?

Well, I was hoping for a bad ending, but I guess the journey was good enough for me. Thank you for the story and I hope to see more.

Nooooo Sonja died, I wanted the witches to save her

Absolutely loved the story. I don't know why, but I found myself hoping Amelia would be returned to human form. Either way, I'm a fan! Bravo!

Awesome story! For some reason I found myself hoping Amelia would be returned to human form. No matter, either way I'm a fan!

This last part felt very rushed and rough, but otherwise the story was amazing. One of the best I've read on this site.