by joefelton
These idiots that think this belongs in another area are just that idiots.
This is a very loving wife story.
I bet the people who write negative comments probably came 2 or 3 times too it also.
In the ending saying that she was in control forever, may not have a happy ending. Marriage is a partnership and appears that she is wanting to dominate this relationship. Men need a certain portion of the reigns to lead and guide and without it they will become weak and dissolutioned.
Short little flash tale, of a loving couple exploring each other together. The ending might have been a prelude to a change in thier relationship, but overall a decent little birthday present from a loving wife to her husband. Nothing here for the morality police to get crazy about, no cheating was committed here. 4* but yeah, don't continue this story please. It's complete as is.
Check this sentence - "He stuck his tongue out towards her slit and licked with the flat surface; moments later he used his fingers to spread her lips apart." - She hadn't untied him yet, impossible for him to use his fingers. Nice concept, straightforward storytelling, well-done