by joefelton
Check this sentence - "He stuck his tongue out towards her slit and licked with the flat surface; moments later he used his fingers to spread her lips apart." - She hadn't untied him yet, impossible for him to use his fingers. Nice concept, straightforward storytelling, well-done
Short little flash tale, of a loving couple exploring each other together. The ending might have been a prelude to a change in thier relationship, but overall a decent little birthday present from a loving wife to her husband. Nothing here for the morality police to get crazy about, no cheating was committed here. 4* but yeah, don't continue this story please. It's complete as is.
In the ending saying that she was in control forever, may not have a happy ending. Marriage is a partnership and appears that she is wanting to dominate this relationship. Men need a certain portion of the reigns to lead and guide and without it they will become weak and dissolutioned.
These idiots that think this belongs in another area are just that idiots.
This is a very loving wife story.
I bet the people who write negative comments probably came 2 or 3 times too it also.