by Ausgirl66
The story felt unfinished with Nadine still suspecting Neal of fucking Carol. That is the reason this became a 4 star instead of a 5 star for me.
Until they want baby #2. I promise, Nadine will be watching him like a hawk if that happens. Or if Nadine actually decides to use Google & finds out that sperm only lives outside the body for 15-30min (in the right conditions), or up to one hour in a jar.
To quote a line in beatlejuice on the handbook for the recently deceased: "This book reads like stereo instructions." ...but it wasn't bad I guess
A new take on a well trod path, Well Done!! Also, you have spared the marriages and families, again, Well Done. I especially like the letter. The late 19th and early 20th century French Army's motto was "L'audace, toujour L'audace". We are straining the limits of my French, but I do know it means Audacity, always Audacity. Of course, in my country, we might say "if you can't dazzle them with facts, blind 'em with bullshit".
Happy Holidays to you and yours!!
Paul
Oh what an odd story, odd in a nice way, just off the normal for on here.
Nice plot and not just the BTB type of story.