All Comments on 'Good Taste'

by MarthaMcKinley

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silentsoundsilentsoundover 3 years ago

Well. Your writing has a nice style but cuck humiliation is not tasty at all.

He didn't run his one off in her face, nor did he fuck her best friend or sister.

Humans behave differently than the sick creatures

Portrayed here.

The best "friend" would be hunted and destroyed for the violation.

The sick bitch would be no more than an afterthought.

dunmovynivdunmovynivover 3 years ago

O hell no. Goodbye butch

TajfaTajfaover 3 years ago

I have no words for how distasteful this is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nasty stuff

And NOT in a good way.

1 star

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
None

No normal humans were depicted in this nasty mess.

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Just go the f*** away.

Either you troll very well or you really need help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

LW has reached a new low. Disgusting! And if I remember right NO WIFE!!!! Can't lit PLEASE give us minus scores?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Put that piss and shit licking in Fetish

Where was the wife in this LW story? 1 star

DazzyDDazzyDover 3 years ago

Ok but a little sick...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Disappointing

Excellent writing form, but substance is "distasteful."

bioman57bioman57over 3 years ago

Hated it!!! Very nasty...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Outstanding

Masterful job of translating an often times considered taboo subject (not by moi, however) into an erotic adventure, worthy of “the next level” of true love & lust.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Here Suck on this

For her a rifle barrel,

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
NO Stars....

How do I un-read this?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
calm down

this is insanely overwritten

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOL you so talent free

Fetish cuck crap in designer in twisted yarn. Makes one vomit, Go away!

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 2 years ago

I must say that as entertaining as the story was, all fraught with deception, the respondent comments were hilarious

MarthaMcKinleyMarthaMcKinleyover 2 years agoAuthor

Your comment, NVDiceGuy, made me smile. I like your observation and appreciate your sense of humor.

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Early in my 50s, I began writing erotica, following the advice of Anne Lamont, in her book, Bird By Bird. She recommended that a writer introduce characters, have them interact, and see where the story leads. So I tried that, and things did indeed happen. Write about what you ...