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Greetings, I'm just trying my hand at writing and hoping to improve with practice. I've been posting shorter works, Brentwood background information, and other stories in the following places: Blogspot https://thebrentwoodsociety.blogspot.com/?zx=27aad9a8f5a6a684 Deviantar...