All Comments on 'Goodbye, My Hot Young Wife'

5 Stars! Well done. Really funny!

I hope the poor guy eventually stumbles upon Mrs. Right (Although I've got my doubts)

Got a 3 in this category, but a 4 or 5 in Humor or Satire where it belonged.

No story there, I didn't find it.

Would this king of England be Henry VIII?

Interesting story!

4

5 stars * * * * *

I didn't get it until the end.

Thanks for something different. Thanks for some literature.

Clever twist :)

Clever! But ape, damn you for.sticking man unnamed, and technically unrelated but obvious song in my head. Sherman's Hermits have a lot to answer for.

Charles, is that you?

Well done; I didn't get it until I got to "Annie" but it all fit. Again, very clever and well written.

Extra boring

Not funny...just boring...Too boring!

Oh, you magnificent bastard.

5 stars! Very clever, and very funny. Who knows, maybe our narrator might meet another Cathy, one who'll be Parr for the course. Thank you for a fun read.

OK, it is history, but it is fake history and still boring.

Fun unusual idea.

Clever, very clever! Well done 5 stars

I love me a twist ending, especially when I don't see it coming. Well done!

So funny!

Clever and well written, with a light, breezy style. However, that also meant that there wasn’t much character development or emotional impact. In retrospect, once I’d caught on to the story, it was almost “history light.”

Cute but cheesy.

Almost makes me wish I had stayed awake in History class.

Very clever.

That was clever and nicely executed. if I can use that expression! 5*.

Only one word to describe this attempt at a story. Dumb.

Clever! Divorced, Beheaded, Died, Divorced, Beheaded, Survived...

Trust Literotica to give me a new perspective on history. 5 stars.

It's good to be the king! Except when it isn't.

I got it, just didn't enjoy it, very boring retelling. With zero dialogue there was no story to engage the reader, just a writer trying to be clever at the reader's expense.

I love it xD

Great story with an ending worthy of O. Henry. Considering the content, even Oliver Cromwell might approve. (If he could loosen up some...)

Drone on and on.

I had to read the comments to figure out what was going on. But, once I had I liked it.

Absolutely horrible.

And I thought I wrote a good LW [double] twist. I got a bit lost in the middle TBH. But I was glad I preserved. The resolve gave me a big 😊. Hey, if a damned know-nothing colonial gets the joke, it’s a good joke. Bravo. Em

"How did this happen to me of all people?"

I thought about stopping here.

I did stop here:

"Oh, Cathy, my Cathy!"

Glad I did going by other comments.

Didn't make it past the first Cathy, or was it Kathy? Who cares? Not me. Why would this asshole's meandering recollections of past pussy be interesting?

When Number Three died young and was named Jane, I figured it out. Still, a fun little read. I must admit I didn't know that the axion "If you smell shit all day, check your shoes" originated with Henry VII. But there's no reason it couldn't have. Nicely done.

Didn't like it, couldn't get into it because of the writing. Unlike one of the esteemed commenters below me, I'm not reading other's comments to find out what's going on in the story. I stop reading if the words don't tell me. 2 stars Bob

Talk about a boring narcissistic asshole!!

Well Done.

87% of the commenters are to dumb, disconnected, mentally ill, self-absorbed, unappreciative and/or flat out stupid to either understand or appreciate the cheeky irony of this piece. It's completely wasted on this most of this crowd.

Good rant but not erotic. We're looking for eroticism here, remember?

Arn’t some of the commentators dumb ?

A right good royal story, worthy of our current lot.

5 stars.

Excellent, creative story 5* from me.

Some readers are too illiterate to get it. That’s obvious from their adolescents comments.

Self pity sorry POS story.

If some readers don’t get it, it is a testimonial to the desperately poor state of the education system in the U.S. can you say, “Shakespeare?” 5*

Oh fab. What a great twist at the end there.

Very funny; nice piece.

That was different.